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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates different careers in
The
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Great Britain and their compensations when they started and after three years,
while
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 the table presents the amount of
hours
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 worked per
week
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 for each speciality.
Overall
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,
their
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 is a slight increase in their salaries from when they started and after three years in all
profession
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professions
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. Nurses earn the least compared to underground driver who earns the most in the study group. Nurses earn 18,000
pounds
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 which is directly proportional to the number of
hours
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 worked per
week
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,
in contrast
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 to underground
driver
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drivers
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 whose salaries
is
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are
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 indirectly proportional to the amount of time worked. They work the least
hours
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 in the group at 36
hours
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 per
week
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 earning the highest
at
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starting salary of 50,000
pounds
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. Law enforcers have the biggest increase in terms of salary because
the
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they
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 start with a salary of 21,000
pounds
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 at
beginning
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the beginning
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 of their career and have an increase of 2,000
pounds
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 compared to others who have 1,000
pounds
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. The firemen have the most amount of time in the
working place
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workplace
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 at 55
hours
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 per
week
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 with
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the second
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second highest
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second-highest
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 pay of 40,000
pounds
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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