You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear

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/Madam, I am writing

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letter to participate in a work-related seminar in your country. My profession is in marketing and I am

interesting

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interested

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in joining

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event

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. I want some information about the seminar

specially

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regarding the dates of the program. How many guests will join in the

event

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, the facilities that you have provided for us and the cost of the program.

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, I want to know the theme of the

event

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and what is the

dresscode

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dress code

for

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event

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. I am looking forward to

hear

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from you soon! Your’s

faithfully

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, LISA

nazianoor1314Sat Mar 08 2025

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Be sure to format your salutation correctly; it should be either 'Dear Sir/Madam' or 'Dear [Name]'.

coherence and cohesion

Try to structure your letter into clear paragraphs where each idea is developed fully. This aids coherence.

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Make sure to double-check spelling and grammar, such as in 'interesting' instead of 'interesting', and 'dress code' instead of 'dresscode'.

tone

The letter is polite and maintains a formal tone throughout, which is appropriate for the context.

task achievement

You clearly outline your request for information, demonstrating an understanding of what to ask for in this scenario.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

97 words

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