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Band 6.5

A LOCAL NEWSPAPER IS LOOKING FOR PEOPLE TO DO SOME PART-TIME WORK WRITING FOR THE NEWSPAPER YOU DECIDE TO APPLY FOR THE WORK WRITE A LETTER TO THE EDITOR OF THE NEWSPAPER IN YOUR LETTER EXPLAIN WHY YOU ARE INTERESTED IN DOING THIS WORK. SUGGEST WHAT TOPICS YOU COULD WRITE ABOUT. GIVE YOUR OPINION OF THIS NEWSPAPER

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Dear Editor, I am reaching out to express my strong interest in the part-time writing position at Trust Standard
Newspaper
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. As an avid reader of your publication, I have always admired the way it delves into pressing issues with clarity and insight, particularly your recent feature on youth empowerment. It is a testament to the
newspaper
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's dedication to addressing topics that genuinely impact the community. My passion for writing, combined with relevant experience, makes me eager to contribute to your team. I have written extensively for community blogs and health initiatives, with one of my recent articles focusing on the critical need for comprehensive sex education among teenagers.
This
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 piece sparked productive conversations among educators and parents, highlighting how well-crafted stories can inspire positive change. I am confident that I can bring
this
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 same level of engagement and purpose to your
newspaper
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. If given the opportunity, I would focus on topics that promote awareness and foster dialogue,
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 as sex education, youth mentorship, and local community initiatives.
For instance
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, profiling the work of local organizations advocating for health education can shed light on their contributions
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 resonating with your audience. Your
newspaper
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 stands out for its balanced reporting and commitment to amplifying important voices. It would be an
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 to contribute to
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 a respected platform, adding meaningful perspectives and enriching the content your
readers
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reader's
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 value. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of joining your team and supporting your mission through impactful storytelling. Yours faithfully, [Your Full Name]

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coherence and cohesion
Consider varying your sentence structure to enhance the flow of ideas and add interest.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a clear main idea, and fully develop these ideas for deeper engagement.
task achievement
Your letter has a polite and professional tone, suitable for an application.
task achievement
You provided specific examples of topics you could write about, which strengthens your application.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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