The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied bar graph gives information about families
of
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in
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the
Unite
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United
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States, between the
years
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2007, 2011 and 2015, and,
in addition
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, it shows comparatives about their annual
income
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.
Overall
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, a large number of families had had an
income
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of $1000.000 or more.
On the other hand
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, only a few households were in the group with an annual
income
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of $75.000 to $99.999.
In addition
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, through the
years
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we cannot see a lot of changes in the distribution. Between
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years
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the years
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2007 and 2011, we can see a change in the proportion of people who had an annual
income
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between less than $25.000 to $49.999. Specifically, the first group
increasing
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from 25
million
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to 29
million
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of
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apply
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people in four
years
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, the same situation occurred with the second group because increasing from 26
million
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to 30
million
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of
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apply
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householder
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households
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. In
Moreover
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, by 2011 around 27
million
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of
house holders
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householders
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had $100.000 or more annual
income
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. By 2015
this
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number
increasing
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increased
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to 33
million
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of
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apply
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families.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, income, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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