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A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -describe what this book was about -explain how this book influenced you -say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Respected Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter about the
book
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 that incredibly influenced me. The
book
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 was named 'The Ultimate Guide
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 Future'. As the name of the
book
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 itself mentions the meaning of the
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 is about guidance
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 upcoming years, it exactly gives the roadmap to get successful
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 in terms of career and life.
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, the language used in the
book
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 is easily understood as it is very simple plain English.
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, I was more attracted to the booklet for several reasons, one of them is, that the
book
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 is written by the famous writer "The Taylor". Undoubtedly, his books are always inspiring and always spread positivity. The album acts as enlightening energy for doing something worthy in your career.
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, it boosts the energy to work hard for a better future.
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 but not least,
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 album would be a great addition to the article
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 considering many aspects of pathways to succeed in life for the upcoming generation by doing good deeds in current times. To elaborate, the way of explaining is what engages the reader.
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, it will be the nicest choice to include in the Article. Yours Sincerely,
binoy
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Binoy
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task achievement
Try to elaborate more on how the book specifically influenced your personal development or decisions. Providing personal examples can strengthen your response.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to avoid using words like 'album' when referring to a book; using the right terminology is important. Also, ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus that reflects the paragraph's main idea.
task achievement
The introduction is clear and effectively states the purpose of the letter, which is great for engaging the reader.
coherence and cohesion
Good use of simple language that makes the content accessible and easy to understand, which is commendable.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • influential
  • perspective
  • transformative
  • introspection
  • universal
  • timeless
  • contemporary
  • resonate
  • inspiration
  • genre
  • anecdote
  • relevance
  • beliefs
  • motivations
  • significance
  • courteous
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