IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 3.5

The chart below gives information on agricultural exports from the United States in 2019 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information on agricultural exports from the United States in 2019 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The diagram illustrates the comparison of agricultural exports from America in 2019 and 2020. Looking from an
overall
Linking Words
 perspective, it
readily
Add a missing verb
is readily
show examples
 apparent that the amount of
soybeans
Fix the agreement mistake
soybean
show examples
 exprotations overwhelmed others in both years, and these four genres of exports from the United States increased in 2020. To analyze
this
Linking Words
 graph, we begin by taking a closer look at the data presents and it is obvious that
agricultural
Correct article usage
the agricultural
show examples
 industry sold
soybeens
Correct your spelling
soybeans
 the most, which soared
almost
Change preposition
to almost
show examples
 5
billions
Change to singular
billion
show examples
 in one year, reached over 25
billions
Change to singular
billion
show examples
 in 2020, the number of exportation progressed more than beef, pork, corn as well; meanwhile, it is the only genre which sold over 10 billion dollars. As
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
can be seen, from 2019 to 2020, beef remained stable at approximately 6 billion dollars, pork and corn rose slightly and the
persentage
Correct your spelling
percentage
 still under 10
billions
Change to singular
billion
show examples
 in American agriculture.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
  • agricultural exports
  • trend analysis
  • export values
  • significant growth or decline
  • leading agricultural products
  • market demand
  • weather conditions
  • international trade policies
  • summarize
  • potential reasons
What to do next:
Look at other essays: