The table shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. CountrySpending on healthcare per person in 2010 Japan$2,690 South Korea$1,187 Singapore$1,035 Bahrain$810 Kuwait$796 Argentina$551 Chile$473 Brazil$426 Global Average$717

The table shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. CountrySpending on healthcare per person in 2010 Japan$2,690 South Korea$1,187 Singapore$1,035 Bahrain$810 Kuwait$796 Argentina$551 Chile$473 Brazil$426 Global Average$717
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. CountrySpending on healthcare per person in 2010 Japan$2,690 South Korea$1,187 Singapore$1,035 Bahrain$810 Kuwait$796 Argentina$551 Chile$473 Brazil$426 Global Average$717
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The table illustrates how much healthcare spending per person in 2010 from 8 selected
countries
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. Generally,
countries
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from Far East Asia excessively consume health services, with Japan taking the leading position globally which is spending three times more than average.
Level
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The level
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of spending largely depends on the region.
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, Asians spend more than the global average on wellness care. Indeed, Japan taking the leading position in the global by spending more than $2,500 each person.
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is equivalent to three times higher than the average.
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, is followed by other Far East
countries
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, South Korea and Singapore which spend over $1,000 each.
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, the Middle
East
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countries
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, Bahrain and Kuwait allocate less than the Far East below $900 for medical care, but still above the average of $717.
On the other hand
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,
the
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apply
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Chile and Brazil spend much less than other
countries
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for healthcare services
of
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$473 and $426, respectively, nearly half of
global
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the global
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average infrastructure.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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