Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is the case? What can governments do to help the amount of rubbish produced?

In recent days, folks are creating more waste than ever. The main reason
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phenomenon is the consumption rates of plastic packaging are increasing significantly. I believe that the authority can make several regulations for manufacturers in order to push down the
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. the market's demand
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non-reusable things
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rising in
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big figures.
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, plastics are produced in a larger amount than some decades ago.
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, some parts of the community are preferring malleable packaging over other materials.
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,
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materials
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affect the
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date of some goods
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as food and water.
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, over 50
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of
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tend to use plastic bottled
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in their daily activity.
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, consumers' behaviour
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a critical role in the context of rising
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of ductile materials.
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, the government's approach may be essential in order to tackle
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issue as they can regulate the problem, including some policies for the
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house.
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, the authorities' intervention are becoming important because
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the significant totals of rubbish have been affecting the community's well-being.
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phenomenon is
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society members,
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poor health, environmental contamination, and water pollution. To tackle
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difficulties, the government could introduce
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of policies
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as strengthening
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rates of manufacturers and providing
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sites.
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, those policies will touch the root of the problem.
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, the increasing figure of ductile
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was caused by the high number of
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demand. As a solution, public officials should be approaching the lack of rules in some sections of social realms.

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coherence and cohesion
Try to clearly organize your main ideas in separate paragraphs to improve logical flow. Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea that supports your argument.
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Use more specific examples or data to strengthen your arguments, which will help make your ideas clearer and more compelling.
language use
Ensure accurate subject-verb agreement and grammatical structures. Check for pluralization, such as 'authorities' instead of 'authority' and 'plastics' instead of 'plastic'.
task achievement
Your essay addresses both questions posed by the prompt, showing good understanding of the topic.
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You have expressed relevant ideas regarding the issue of waste production and potential solutions.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • single-use products
  • landfills
  • recycling programs
  • sustainability
  • non-recyclable materials
  • throwaway culture
  • upgrading
  • advertising
  • packaging materials
  • convenience-oriented lifestyles
  • environmental impact
  • infrastructure
  • waste management policies
  • population growth
  • electronic waste (e-waste)
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