Some people think that sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete be-come more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Being more useful adults based on having eligibility to have better cooperative

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at primary schools is not rooted in reality,because ,playing an effective role in society has been set out based on the needs and expectations in various situations which have been defined ,so individuals that have a talent and awareness to grab these opportunities are favourable and have a good managing critical momentums ,

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, other side has been supposed children who were expert at competitions could potentially be encouraged to train a skilful adult for the future ,It has been known obviously that only professional pupils at competitions have not necessary reach at achievements on their roles among communities .To explore these mindsets I would explain in detail in the following sentences . Designing a curriculum for primary schools must encourage children to know about various types of

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as cooperation among groups , competitions and struggling to get

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highest achievements .if academics have emphasized one side of these

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these students have been led to be involved in building bands and gangs to prove themselves,because ,each individual needs to show their own abilities and superiorities and these are must-build networking ideas not only to reach results or

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projects to accomplish. cooperation is designed for accelerating progress on the road of education , working and having leisure time with friends , classmates or colleagues,

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,for being a useful and

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effective person it has been rooted in the needs and expectations which play crucial factors for each society,so , every child must train about different attitudes of various types of societies , communities and groups to find their perspective toward a service and give a suitable response to their wanted and desires . Competitional

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could generate tensions in the atmosphere which have to build some motivations,

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,if these methods have been distributed and allocated rigorously ,it would bring dazzling outputs for a temporary period of time . I think that to have more useful adults in our societies we need more lessons about different needs and expectations in human nature ,not standing on one side that the competition vs, cooperative lessons could be trending and produce skilful professional adults for our societies .