You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir, I just read the article in your international travel magazine and I found some unrealistic information about our city. you mentioned that our town is on the top of
drug addicted
Add a hyphen
drug-addicted
person
in our country which is not correct. Your magazine proving Fix the agreement mistake
persons
a
inappropriate Change the article
an
i
formation. It is Change the capitalization
I
significant
for you to rectify Correct word choice
important
this
mistake because it Linking Words
put
a wrong impression on our town. Many tourists Verb problem
left
came
to visit our historical places which are phenomenal, If they read all Wrong verb form
come
Linking Words
this
negative comments from Change the determiner
these
such
a popular magazine; it will definitely Linking Words
put
Verb problem
have
a
impact on our tourist spots and economic growth. Change the article
an
Instead
of spreading Linking Words
a
false rumours, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
your
should display the best things about our city and even for others as well. Correct pronoun usage
you
For instance
- you can promote the tourism in country Linking Words
with
giving Change preposition
by
the
great examples of historical and interesting spots and Correct article usage
apply
help
our economy to grow.
I hope you consider my points.
Thank you,
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helping
ramanpreetkaur7309
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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to check for spelling and grammatical errors for better clarity.
task achievement
Consider using a more formal tone and appropriate vocabulary to enhance your message.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph conveys a single clear idea, and avoid merging multiple thoughts in one paragraph.
task achievement
You have correctly identified the issue and stated its importance, which aligns with the task requirements.
task achievement
Your letter includes a clear suggestion on how to address the misinformation, which shows critical thinking.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,