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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir, I just read the article in your international travel magazine and I found some unrealistic information about our city. you mentioned that our town is on the top of
drug addicted
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person
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 in our country which is not correct. Your magazine proving
a
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 inappropriate
i
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 formation. It is
significant
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 for you to rectify
this
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 mistake because it
put
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 a wrong impression on our town. Many tourists
came
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 to visit our historical places which are phenomenal, If they read all
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this
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 negative comments from
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 a popular magazine; it will definitely
put
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a
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 impact on our tourist spots and economic growth.
Instead
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 of spreading
a
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false rumours,
your
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 should display the best things about our city and even for others as well.
For instance
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- you can promote the tourism in country
with
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 giving
the
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great examples of historical and interesting spots and
help
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 our economy to grow. I hope you consider my points. Thank you, Simar

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to check for spelling and grammatical errors for better clarity.
task achievement
Consider using a more formal tone and appropriate vocabulary to enhance your message.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph conveys a single clear idea, and avoid merging multiple thoughts in one paragraph.
task achievement
You have correctly identified the issue and stated its importance, which aligns with the task requirements.
task achievement
Your letter includes a clear suggestion on how to address the misinformation, which shows critical thinking.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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