The graph below shows the average monthly salary and the prices of black and white and colour TV in Japanese yen from 1953 to 1973.

The graph below shows the average monthly salary and the prices of black and white and colour TV in Japanese yen from 1953 to 1973.
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The line diagram represents the
avarage
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average
income received in a month and the cost of coloured and monochrome television between 1953 to 1973 in Japan. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that the number of
salary
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increased significantly in the observed periods.
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, the price of television plummeted in 20 years. Turning to money which individuals got in 1953, Japanese people got payment at just above 20,
then
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rose steadily by 45 yen in 10 years. After that,
this
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number skyrocketed and reached a peak at 180 yen in the
last
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period. Moving to the television cost,
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initially
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the price stayed at 100 in 1955 and declined fractionally until 1968,
however
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, the cost of black and white TV remained constant at around 40 until the end of the reported time.
Likewise
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, there was a
dramatical
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decrease
of
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in
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colored TV from 1958 to 1963, before declining steadily by 20%.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average monthly salary
  • Black and white TV
  • Colour TV
  • Japanese Yen
  • Affordability
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Technological advancements
  • Consumer preferences
  • Price dynamics
  • Market changes
  • Increase/decrease
  • Ratio
  • Introduction
  • Compare/contrast
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