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, France ,Malaysia ,Use synonyms
Brazil
and Egypt from 1995 to 2010.
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, it is clearly shown that Linking Words
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was increased than other countries. Correct article usage
the USA
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aproximately
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approximately
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millions
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the
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the period it Correct your spelling
throughout
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was
increased significantly to 60 Unnecessary verb
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millions
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million
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USA
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the USA
was
rose gradually to approximately 90 Unnecessary verb
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millions
visitors in 2005 but Change to singular
million
than
it remained stable over the period.
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then
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, 10 Linking Words
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millions tourist
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million tourists
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in
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and they
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rise
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millions tourist
. Fix the agreement mistake
million tourists
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, Malaysia Linking Words
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started Unnecessary verb
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to
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apply
aproximately
22 Correct your spelling
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millions
guests and Change to singular
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then
it Linking Words
was
increased Unnecessary verb
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gradualy
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gradually
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millions
guests arrived Change to singular
million
to
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in
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country
.
In Add an article
the country
conculusion
, it is noticeable that over the period the highest Correct your spelling
conclusion
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USA
and the lowest Correct article usage
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Brazil
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