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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
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The chart displays the variance sources of the United
Kingdom
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air
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pollutants
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 between 1990 to 2005.
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, the amount of
air
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pollutants
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 in the United Kingdom decreased significantly over time. Despite the dramatic drop throughout the period, the highest source of
air
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pollutants
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 was the industry
pollutants
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. There was a slight fluctuation in the transport and the
households
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household's
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air
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pollutants
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. The total
air
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pollutants
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 in the United Kingdom declined rapidly from 7
million
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 in 1990 to 4
million
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 in 1999,
then
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 reached the lowest point of 3
million
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 in 2005 after a slight decrease. The highest amount of
air
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pollutants
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 was by industry, which started at approximately 5.5
million
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 in 1990
then
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 it experienced a sharp dip to 5
million
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 after 6 years before reaching a low in 2005.
The transport
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Transport
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 and
the
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households were the least causes of
air
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pollutants
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,
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 because each of them could not pass a
million
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 tons.
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, transport
pollutants
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, which varied during the whole period, were more
pollutants
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 than
the
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household
pollutants
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. The household was the only
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pollutants'
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pollutants
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 source
showed
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that showed
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 a
stability
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stable
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 trend for 15 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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