The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.

The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about the number of people who smoked cigarettes in the UK between 2011 and 2021.
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
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of male and female cigarette
smokers
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in the UK from 2011 to 2021.
Overall
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, the
number
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of cigarette
smokers
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declined significantly for both men and women over the period. Men had the highest
number
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of
smokers
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in 2011,
while
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the
number
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of female
smokers
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was lower but followed a similar trend. In 2011, the
number
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of male
smokers
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was over 4
million
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.
This
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figure dropped sharply to between 2.5 and 3
million
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by 2012. From 2013 to 2020, the
number
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fluctuated around 2.5
million
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before reaching its lowest point of just over 1
million
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in 2021.
Similarly
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, women had the highest
number
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of
smokers
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in 2011, at around 3.6
million
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.
This
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number
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declined to 1.9
million
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in 2012, reaching its lowest point of 1
million
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in 2013.
However
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, between 2014 and 2018, female
smokers
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increased slightly to 1.7
million
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before declining again, hitting their lowest level in 2021.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, smokers, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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