The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
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The line chart represents
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the sum
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of
books
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read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 until 2014. The vertical axis showcases
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,
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the horizontal
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illustrates the period of time.
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, females were
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a former
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leader
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in 2011 and
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figure constantly increased for two years,
whereas
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male’s
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one was increasing
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more steeply. In 2013 the quantity of
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read by ladies and gentlemen equalised.
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, after 2013, the situation completely changed and women’s
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decreased,
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men’s
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continued to surge.
According to
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the given graph, it can be observed that amount of
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read by ladies was just around 5000 and gentlemen’s
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was a little bit higher than 2000.
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,
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the number
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of
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read by females reached its maximum
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words books, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • library
  • gender
  • reading habits
  • compare
  • significantly
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • consistent
  • fluctuate
  • period
  • summarise
  • graph
  • public library
  • books read
  • Burnaby Public Library
  • 2011 to 2014
  • male
  • female
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