The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart gives information about the carbon dioxide emission for each individual in the UK,
Swedeen
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Sweden
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, Italy and
Portagual
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Portugal
from 1967 to 2007 and
break
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down the results by ten years. As reflected by
y-axis
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the y-axis
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, the emmion is measured from 0 to 12 in metric
tonnes
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, the UK has the highest impact on CO2
emmision
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emissions
from 1967 to 2007 despite its decreasing trend. Portugal,
on the other hand
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, has the least
emmision
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emission
emissions
per person
although
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its value increases gradually from around 1 metric
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tonnes
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to 5 metric
tonnes
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in
final
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.
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, the proportion of Italy
continuosly
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continuously
rose from almost 4 metric
tonnes
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to nearly 8 metric
tonnes
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in 30 years,
then
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remained unchanged from 1997 to 2007. In Sweden,
on the other hand
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, its value peaked
up to
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11 metric
tonnes
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at
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1977,
then
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sharply declined to 7 metric
tonnes
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at
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1987, and ended up to
neraly
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nearly
generally
5 metric
tonnes
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at
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2007. In fact, CO2
emmision
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emissions
in the UK went down
form
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from
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11 metric
tonnes
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to 9 metric
tonnes
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in 40 years with
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a marginall
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marginall
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marginal
marginally
decrease.
Morever
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, Sweden and Italy crossed each other and shared the same value
at
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in
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1987 which
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arond
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around
7 metric
tonnes
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.
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