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*IELTS Training By Simiyu Paul_R The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

*IELTS Training By Simiyu Paul_R The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart displays key information about the differences in clothing exports from various nations from 1999 to 2003. The unit is measured in millions of dollars.
According to
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 what is shown in Maynamer, it started at zero in 1999.
Then
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, there be a jump to 800
million
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. After that, there was a growth to 930
million
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. In 2002, it dropped sharply by 600
million
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.
Finally
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, it increased slightly to 420. In terms of Japan
firstly
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, it began as the highest one at just below 600. In the second year, it decreased slightly to 520
million
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. In 2001, there was an increase in the number of clothing exports to just below 600
million
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.
Finally
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, it decreased significantly to just below 500
million
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. In 1999, Colombia started at 450
million
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. In the second year, it rose steadily to 510
million
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. After that, it increased sharply to 700
million
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 in 2002.
Finally
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, it decreased to 600
million
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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