You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter – introduce yourself – explain the situation – say what action you would like the company to takeDear

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Dear manager, I Amarpreet Singh ,

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apply

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recently booked a car on the date of 25 February 2025,

reference

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The reference

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no of booking is 356789 and it is a Honda Civic of grey colour.My

adrress

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address

is 2400 Tidewater Crescent Ontario .I am writing

this

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letter to tell you about

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the inconveience

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inconveience

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inconvenience

that

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had to

faced

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because of your staff'

negelence

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negligence

. I have been driving

this

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car

from

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the

last

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two weeks and

last

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Friday the air conditioner of the vehicle stopped working on

the

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Highway 401,anyway

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managed somehow to

reached

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my destination.

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, I called your service department they told me they are going to fix

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defect within 2 days since that day I did not

received

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receive

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any call and

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they are not answering my call too .I have

visted

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visited

listed

at services department and they just

hand

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handed

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me over a booking reference without telling me any

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information. I would like to you pay attention to my complaint or cancel my contract and return my deposit so that I can book a car from any other rental agency. Thank you Sincerely, Amarpreet Singh.

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coherence and cohesion

Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs. For example, introduce yourself in one paragraph, explain the situation in another, and state your request in a separate paragraph.

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Make sure to proofread your letter for grammatical errors and typos. For instance, correct 'inconveience' to 'inconvenience' and 'negelence' to 'negligence'.

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Using a more formal tone could enhance your letter. For example, instead of 'I would like to you pay attention to my complaint', you could say, 'I kindly request your urgent attention to my complaint'.

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You clearly stated the details of your rental and the issue you faced, which is essential for understanding the situation.

coherence and cohesion

You addressed the manager formally, which is appropriate for this type of correspondence.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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