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Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say how important New Year is to people in your country describe how New Year is celebrated in your country explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country

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Dear Messi, I hope you are doing well. I’m delighted to hear about your college project on New
Year
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 celebrations in different countries, and I’d be happy to share insights about how it is observed in my country. In my country, New
Year
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 is not just a calendar event; it holds great significance for many
people
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. It is seen as a fresh start, a time to reflect on past achievements and set new goals for the coming
year
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. Families and friends gather to celebrate, making it an occasion filled with joy and optimism. The celebrations here are quite vibrant. Many
people
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 attend social gatherings or host dinners at home, enjoying traditional food and exchanging good wishes. Public places, especially major cities, are decorated with lights, and some locations organize fireworks displays at midnight.
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 New
Year
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 is not a deeply rooted cultural or religious event,
people
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 still embrace the spirit of renewal and togetherness. What I love most about New
Year
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’s celebrations in my country is the sense of unity and hope they bring. It is a time when
people
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 momentarily set aside their worries, cherish their loved ones, and look forward to new opportunities. The warm and festive atmosphere makes it truly special. I hope
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 information helps with your project. Let me know if you need any more details! Best regards, Leo

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The letter has a clear structure with logical flow between paragraphs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant
  • reflection
  • goals
  • loved ones
  • fireworks
  • gatherings
  • traditions
  • public events
  • religious ceremonies
  • festive atmosphere
  • reconnect
  • exchanging gifts
  • resolutions
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