The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The two maps illustrate the changes on the
island
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in the field of tourist facilities.
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, the
island
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changed dramatically from an empty reef into a modernised
area
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and has become more touristy. The buildings,
such
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as
accommodatios
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accommodations
, were introduced, and a restaurant was added. Looking at details, it can be seen that before constructing all those facilities for tourists
island
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had an empty look with only several trees. It had a special place for a beach and a big sea that surrounded it. After some time
area
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changed dramatically with some additional recreational places. The major construction has been
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the accommodations at the centre of the
island
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and on the left side of the
area
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.
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,
it
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was built a reception
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a reception was built
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on the left side of the centre,
while
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the restaurant was placed on top of the reception with a sea view. Some piers
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and
the
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boats were introduced, and the beach has become a swimming
area
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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