In some countries riding bicycles is the most common thing rather than cars, in others cars are more popular transport options. What is the causes? And write your own view.

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In some countries, people prefer

bicycles

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over

cars

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while

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in others,

cars

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are the main mode of transport. There are several reasons behind these differences and I think

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bicycles

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should be encouraged more. Promote cycling is

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the more

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efficient way because it is eco-friendly and it is more convenient

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their financial resources.

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Africa as an example, many people ride

bicycles

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daily because their finances

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not allow them to buy huge transport.

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bicycle

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bicycles

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can reduce pollution and

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they are suitable to go over with traffic jams.

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, in large countries like the USA,

cars

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are more popular because cities are big. So there can be opportunities for driving huge and fast

transports

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transport

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, electro

cars

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reduce air pollution and

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people to ride safely.

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, huge

cars

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are more convenient for long trips and for transportation. In conclusion,

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bicycles

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are the best way for short riding and to go over with the traffic jams,

cars

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are more convenient for long trips and for transportation.

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Task Achievement

Expand on the introduction to clearly outline the discussion points and provide a more balanced overview of the topic.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that points are fully developed with explanations and examples.

Coherence and Cohesion

Use linking words or phrases to improve the flow of ideas within and between paragraphs.

Task Achievement

The essay addresses the topic and presents a clear opinion on the effectiveness of bicycles versus cars.

Word Count

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A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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In some countries riding bicycles is the most common thing rather than cars, in others cars are more popular transport options. What is the causes? And write your own view.

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Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children’s development as other subjects, so they should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?

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