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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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These pictures illustrate how tomato
ketchup
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 have been produced.
Overall
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, there are 15 steps in the diagram, from picking
tomatoes
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 into boxes to adding it in a meal,
such
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 as hamburger. First of all,
tomatoes
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 have been grown and it should be picked and put in a basket.
Following
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this
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,
tomatoes
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 are sorted into good and bad ones for subsequent processing. In the next stage, the vegetables are sent to a factory, where the process of removing stalks, seeds, and skin begin.
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this
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,
tomatoes
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 are collected in a container where it has been crushed with a help of special lid, and
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 sugar, vinegar and salt must be added and boiled.
The next step is
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 that the liquid is left for two hours to cool it down.
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, ready-made
ketchup
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 is bottled and labelled.
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before a product is packed, has to be passed by quality of control. Only
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this
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,
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ketchup
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 are delivered to supermarkets for subsequent sales.
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,
ketchup
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 is ready to use.

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You have clearly outlined the main steps involved in the ketchup-making process, demonstrating a good understanding of the task.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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