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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The bar chart illustrates the United States household (numbered in millions) yearly
income
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 categorise into five, in the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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 the total
income
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 by year fluctuated over the given period,
although
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 people receiving the second most amount of money remain relatively stable.
To begin
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 with, the number of
households
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 in the United States in 2007 receiving 100,000
million
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 US
dollars
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 was the highest at just below 30
million
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 houses, which was followed by the groups whose
income
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 is than 25,000-49,999million US
dollars
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 and less than 25,000
million
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 US
dollars
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 at about 27 and 25
million
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households
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 respectively.
Furthermore
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, in 2011, there was a slight increase in both the lowest and second-lowest categories,
while
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 the highest category declined to approximately 27
million
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households
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. Meanwhile, In 2015 the number of
households
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 with an
income
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 of less than 50,000
million
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 US
dollars
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 remained relatively the same as in 2011,
while
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in contrast
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 to that year, the highest salary group significantly rose to 34,000
million
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. In general,
while
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 the number of houses across
income
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 groups varies over the years, people with
income
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 of 75,000-99,999
Million
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 US
dollars
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 remained the same over the eight-year period at about 15
million
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 houses.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, households, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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