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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The bar chart illustrates how many
families
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 in the US that earn an annual salary of less than $25,000, $25,000-$49,999, $50,000-$74,999, $75,000-$99,000, and $100,000 or more in 2007. 2011 and 2015. In conclusion,
families
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 who collect annual
income
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 above $100
million
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 were the largest number in the US over the eight years. On the flip side, people who earned the second highest
income
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, ranging from $75,000-$99,000 were the largest
families
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 during the period.
Firstly
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, the sum of
families
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 that earned $100,000 annually increased by about 4
million
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 from 2007 until 2015. It captured approximately 33
million
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 homes in 2015 and placed as the highest number in the US.
Furthermore
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, the number of low-
income
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families
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also
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 increased during eight years.
For instance
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, people with
income
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 below $25 thousand increased from 25
million
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 in 2007 to 28
million
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 in 2015.
In addition
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,
families
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 with annual earnings from 25 thousand bucks to below 50 thousand increased to around 2
million
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 homes, from 27
million
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 in 2007.
In contrast
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,
families
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 that have middle to high
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income
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incomes
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 ranging from $50,000 to below $100,000 remained at the lowest in the US, increasing around 1
million
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 households from 2007 until 2015.
Thus
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, it made
families
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 with annual
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income
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incomes
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 between $75,000 and $99,999 remain in the bottom position for eight years by capturing 15
million
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 homes in 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, income, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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