The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka
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The schematic below illustrates to us the
process
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for recycling plastic bottles.
Overall
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, it is a
9 stage
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9-stage
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, man-made, cyclical
process
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. It starts with
disposing
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the disposal
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of waste ,
this
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garbage
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was
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is
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delivered to a recycling centre, sorted, and eventually converted into new products. First of
all
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all,
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we notice the men who are
instead
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out
garbage
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,
then
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this
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trash was transported by
garbage
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truck to a recycling centre. In the recycling
centre
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centre,
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all trash was sorted and compressed into blocks.
After
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this
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process
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process,
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these blocks were sent to crushing and washing. Crushed and washed
garbage
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is placed into a machine that produces plastic pellets.
Then
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these pellets were heated to form raw materials, which
is
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are
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used to create new products.
This
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process
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helps improve the natural ecosystem,
reduces
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and reduces
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gas emissions and the use of natural materials. I believe that every company that produces products for general use should switch to
this
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method.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, garbage with synonyms.
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