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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The graph illustrates the
number
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 of households in the US by their annual income from 2007 to 2015. In general, from the 18 years period
household
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companies
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'
incomes
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 increase in all points. In the period of time from 2007 to 2015, the
number
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 of households with
incomes
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 less than 25.000$ increased from 25 to a little less than 30 (in
millions
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). From 2007 to 2015 the
number
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 of households with
incomes
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 25.000$-49.999$ increased from a little more than 25 to 30 (in
millions
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). The
number
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 of
household
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companies
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 with
incomes
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 50.000$-74.999$ remains the same. In the period of time from 2007 to 2015, the
number
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 of
household
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companies
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 with
incomes
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 75.000$-99.999$ increased from a little less than 15 to 15 (in
millions
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). From 2007 to 2015
number
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 of
household
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companies
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 with
incomes
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 of 100.000$ and more increased from a little less than 30 to a little less than 35 (in
millions
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).

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, household, companies, incomes, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "a little less than" was used 4 times.
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