The bar chart depicts the distribution of income groups, namely low (40,000 dollars or less), lower middle (40,00 - 70,000 dollars), middle (70,000 - 120,00 dollars), and high (120,000 dollars or more) in the cities and the regional centers of Australia.

The bar chart depicts the distribution of income groups, namely low (40,000 dollars or less), lower middle (40,00 - 70,000 dollars), middle (70,000 - 120,00 dollars), and high (120,000 dollars or more) in the cities and the regional centers of Australia.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart depicts the distribution of income groups, namely low (40,000 dollars or less), lower middle (40,00 - 70,000 dollars), middle (70,000 - 120,00 dollars), and high (120,000 dollars or more) in the cities and the regional centers of Australia.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of four
income
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groups (low, lower
middle
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,
middle
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, and high
income
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) in
cities
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and regional
centres
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of Australia.
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, the majority of
people
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in the
cities
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was
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in the
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middle
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middle-income
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income
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group
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,
while
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the
lower
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lower-middle
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middle
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group
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was dominant in the regional
centres
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. More than 50% of
people
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living in the regional
centres
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received less than 70,000
AUD
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per year, whilst more than
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half of
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in the
cities
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gained more than that number. In the
cities
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, 35% of
people
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had an average yearly
income
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between 70,000 to 120,000
AUD
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, making
this
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group
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the
dominance
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. The second highest proportion was the lower
middle
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group
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at 30%, followed by the
group
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of high
income
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(more than 120,000
AUD
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per year) and low
income
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(less than 40,000
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per year) which accounted for 20% and under 15% respectively. In terms of the regional
centres
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, there were nearly 35% of
people
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categorized in the lower
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middle
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middle-income
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income
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group
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. The percentage of
people
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earned
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who earned
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between 70,000 to 120,000
AUD
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was slightly lower than those in the lower
middle
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group
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, making it ranked
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the
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second place. The least number of
people
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was in the
high
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high-income
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income
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group
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and the remaining was in the
low
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low-income
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income
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group
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, middle, cities, centres, people, group, aud with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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