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The table below shows the number of cars made in Argentina, Australia and Thailand from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of cars made in Argentina, Australia and Thailand from 2003 to 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 table compares the amounts of vehicles manufactured in three different countries (
Argentina
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, Australia, and
Thailand
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) over a 6-year
period
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.
Overall
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,
Thailand
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 produced the most cars among these three regions during the whole
period
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. In
this
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period
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, the numbers of cars made in
Argentina
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 and
Thailand
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 witnessed considerable increases,
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, that in Australia suffered from an almost 50% decline. In 2003, the volumes of automobiles manufactured in
Argentina
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 and
Thailand
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 stood at around 240000 and 740000, respectively. That in
Argentina
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 grew to just over 350000 in 2005, and it
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 rose to roughly 460000 in 2009.
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,
Thailand
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’s vehicle production volume soared and peaked at close to 1200000 in 2005, before experiencing a slight decrease
at the end
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 of
this
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period
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 (reducing to just below 1000000).
In contrast
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 to the increased trends, the amount of car production in Australia saw an approximately two-fold reduction, which was from close to 460000 in 2003 to nearly 250000 in 2009, during
this
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period
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, thereby becoming the less productive country in the car industry among these three countries.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words argentina, thailand, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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