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The Maps below show the paradise Island in the past and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Maps below show the paradise Island in the past and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps
provides
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provide
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 us
information
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 about the change
of
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in
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 Paradise
island
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Island
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 from the past year
and
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apply
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until now in the present.
The significant
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Significant
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 development was made into
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the recretional
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recretional
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recreational
recreation
area
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 which
is
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was
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 previously made for scientific fields. As we can see
that
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apply
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from the table,
Scientific
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the Scientific
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 research
sation
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station
 is
the
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a
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 big development that was remodelled into
hotel
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a hotel
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 complex and swimming pool, still with the same location at the west
area
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ob
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of
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 the island.
in addition
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, farming land was renovated into recreation
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area
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areas
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 which were open
restauranyt
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restaurants
, BBQ
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area
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areas
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, cycle path. and
then
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,
natural
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the natural
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 spring
area
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 was renovated into
cafe
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a cafe
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 in the north of the paradise island. another key of different sites is
piep
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pipe
 with
less
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a less
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 taken part in the near of the beach,
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moreover
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moreover,
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 the location boat was remodelled into a big cruise. Talking about the pier that was made bigger than before in the past . one part that
have
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has
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 no big change is rocks still take place
on
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in
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 the same place between
last
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 decades and now at the moment.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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