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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures shows the percentage of households who owned electrical appliances and their time spent on it per
week
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, from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, as the owner of electrical home devices increased, it constantly reduced the number of housework per
week
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. Since 1920, appliances
such
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 as vacuum cleaner and refrigerator increased significantly by almost 100% and 70% respectively and stay at 100% until 2019.
Although
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 the washing machine
also
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 showing the same upwards pattern by the end of 2019, but it had it's downtrend on 1980 by around 5% before it went up again.
In contrast
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, the number of hours households spent on these appliences reduced significantly over the 90 years. The highest declined was shown in the period of 1920 to 1960, where it was recorded a decreased by 30 hours per
week
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 before it wend contantly decresed to around 10 hours per
week
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 in 2019.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • households
  • percentage
  • reduction
  • significant increase
  • market penetration
  • time-saving
  • domestic chores
  • frequency
  • shopping trips
  • food preparation
  • efficiency
  • leisure time
  • family dynamics
  • correlation
  • societal trend
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