It is very clear that English should be the primary foreign language taught in all schools around the world. Learning a different language before English is, in today’s world, a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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should be the
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international
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taught in all learning
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around the earth. Traning a distinct
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before
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is, in nowadays globe, a harmful
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because all of the
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much more than other languages.
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America and some small countries and not so
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people know and use it
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because of that knowing Spanısh employers did not
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easy a global work.
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informations
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is %75
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and you should understand clearly if you learn
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and you should
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what's happening in the
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from
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, the best educational centers use
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, Harvard , Oxford and Cambridge Universities.
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you may understand
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is the most educational
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people everywhere ıf you
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your road and
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conclusion
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is the most native
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and if you learn
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your life is much easier of all of the things.

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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that your introduction clearly outlines your main argument and the points you will discuss in the essay. This helps the reader know what to expect.
Task Achievement
Try to use more varied vocabulary and correct any spelling errors, as this impacts the overall quality of your writing.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that relates back to your main argument. This improves the structure of your essay.
Task Achievement
Include more specific examples to support your points. This will make your arguments stronger and more persuasive.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on grammar and punctuation, as some areas may cause confusion for the reader.
Task Achievement
You have presented a clear opinion in your introduction, indicating your agreement with the statement.
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You provided relevant points regarding the global importance of English and its prevalence in education and job markets.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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