The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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These two pie charts illustrate the most favoured social media applications for three years from 2011 to 2013.

Overall

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, most of the platforms' use percentages have increased,

however

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, Facebook's percentage decreased significantly. Google use has been doubled in 2012

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and almost doubled in 2013. It went up from 5% in 2011 to 14% in 2013. The percentage increased by approximately 2% every year for Twitter,LinkedIn, and Pinterest.

On the other hand

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, Facebook faced a dramatic drop in these three years. It went down from 59% in 2011 to 38% in 2013. Every year

this

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platform loses 10

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. All of the applications in these charts were going up in percentage except Facebook.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

112 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pie chart
percentage
trend
popularity
social media channel
data
overview
rise
decline
shift
platform
distribution
user preference
notable
significant change
comparison
highlight
survey
analysis
demographics
year-on-year change

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The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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