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The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show favourite social media channels from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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These two pie charts illustrate the most favoured social media applications for three years from 2011 to 2013.
Overall
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, most of the platforms' use percentages have increased,
however
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, Facebook's percentage decreased significantly. Google use has been doubled in 2012
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 and almost doubled in 2013. It went up from 5% in 2011 to 14% in 2013. The percentage increased by approximately 2% every year for Twitter,LinkedIn, and Pinterest.
On the other hand
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, Facebook faced a dramatic drop in these three years. It went down from 59% in 2011 to 38% in 2013. Every year
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 platform loses 10
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. All of the applications in these charts were going up in percentage except Facebook.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • percentage
  • trend
  • popularity
  • social media channel
  • data
  • overview
  • rise
  • decline
  • shift
  • platform
  • distribution
  • user preference
  • notable
  • significant change
  • comparison
  • highlight
  • survey
  • analysis
  • demographics
  • year-on-year change
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