The pie charts and the table show the primary sources and the total amount of fish that transported into United States in the year 1988 to 2000.

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pie chart and table illustrate

fish

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's primary source and transported

fish

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to the US from 1988 to 2000.

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, the total amount of money increased throughout the years. Canada faced a drop in

transportation

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the transportation

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fish

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however

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however,

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other countries were fluctuating and China's proportion increased. For Canada, it was at its peak and was the highest percentage compared to other countries in 1988, which accounted for 60%. It went down

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approximately a half with a percentage of 34 in 1992,

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to 28% in 2000.

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, other countries

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rose

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from 27% to 46% in 1992, a drop of 4% occurred in 2000.

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, China flourished in

fish

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transportation. In 1988, It accounted for only 13

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percent

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per cent

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of the imported

fish

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to the US.

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, as time passed, it went up to 20

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percent

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per cent

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. In 2000, the proportion increased 10

percent

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compared to 1992 reaching 30

percent

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. The total value in Billions of Dollars increased by approximately 2

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percent

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per cent

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in 1988,1992,and 2000, with 6.57,8.52, and 10.72, respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, percent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

primary sources
import
export
sustainable
trade
volume
shifts
increase
decrease
prominent
exporters
fishery
market dynamics
trade agreements
conservation
supply chain
trend analysis
economic impact
fishing industry
environmental concerns

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The pie charts and the table show the primary sources and the total amount of fish that transported into United States in the year 1988 to 2000.

Some peole say that too much time and resources are spent on the protections of wild animmals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter: Say which part-time course you booked. Explain why you need to cancel your booking. Ask about booking a different course.

Governments in many countries are urgently seeking ways to reduce unemployment in rural areas. What are the most effective ways to do this? Which measure do you think would be the single most effective step that governments could take?

More and more parents allow their children to play on computers as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development overweigh the disadvantages?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.