The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020. The pie charts depict the total value of imports in Qatar for five varieties of vegetables for 3 distinct years from 1980 to 2020. Units are denoted in tones.

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020. The pie charts depict the total value of imports in Qatar for five varieties of vegetables for 3 distinct years from 1980 to 2020. Units are denoted in tones.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020. The pie charts depict the total value of imports in Qatar for five varieties of vegetables for 3 distinct years from 1980 to 2020. Units are denoted in tones.
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the number of (in
tons
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) common imported vegetables In Qatar , which are
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, broccoli,garlic,peas,and ginger from 1980 to 2020.
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, for the past 4 decades (1980-2010),
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accounted for the highest proportion, which was around 500
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.
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,
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garlic
secured
the
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second place among all the vegetables
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the same period . From 1980 to 2010,
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the
vegetables proportion
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had
similar
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pattern.
Spanish
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secured the first place, Garlic came the 2nd, and
then
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garlic, broccoli, and peas respectively. in 2020,
everthing
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everything
changed. The number of
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garlic
transported to the other countries increased dramatically,
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,
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decreased to the second. Brocholi
importion
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importation
imported
from approximately 200
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to 300
tons
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.
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, peas remained the
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with under 170
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throughout the years. In 2010, Broccoli
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number
started to rise till it secured
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third place in 2020.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tons, spanish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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