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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of
car
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 ownership in Britain
household
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households
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 from 1990 to 2015, and the expected trend pattern
of
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for
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 the coming 15 years.
Overall
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, The proportion of
houses
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 that
owend
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owned
one
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 or two
cars
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 rose dramatically, with over 40% of
houses
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have
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having
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 at least
one
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car
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. In 1990, many individuals
preferd
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prefer
preferred
 walking, which
makes
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means
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 that over 50% of
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the house
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house
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houses
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have
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had
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 no
cars
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.
However
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, with the
extention
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extension
 of the cities, people needed to own at most
one
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car
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.
As a result
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, in 2000,
approxiamtely
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approximately
 the number of people who do not have
cars
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 decreased by 5% and
continoued
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continued
continue
 to decrease
30
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by 30
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% in 2010. Owning multiple
cars
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 was not popular and only 10% of the population owned two motors
,.
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,
.
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Furthermore
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, in 2005, over 55
percent
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per cent
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 of individuals
have
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had
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one
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car
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,
similarly
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, two
cars
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 or more ownership rose
up
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apply
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to 28% in 2015. In 2030, the number of
houses
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 that do not have
no
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a
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car
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 is expected to decline to less than 20
percent
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per cent
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,
whereas
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, the number of
houses
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 that own at least
one
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car
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 will be increased.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, houses, one, cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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