The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph provides information on the total percentage of Australian exports to
Japan
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, the
USA
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, China and India from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
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, at the start,
Japan
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received the highest imports from Australia,
while
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the lowest was India. Notably, China's international trade grew dramatically,
outnumbered
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Japan
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in the
last
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period,
whereas
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the
USA
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's figure fluctuated.
Japan
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's
import
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from Australia was significantly higher than other nations at 26% before a sharp decline over the next five years to around 20% and a more minimal downward trend until 2012 to finish at a near 17%.
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, China
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1990 received only 3% of exports and
this
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figure grew dramatically, particularly after the year
of
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2000 and
reached
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peaked
to
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28% in 2012. The data for the
USA
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started at 11%, declined after five years and recovered slightly to finish the time surveyed at 6%.
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, India's
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stood at around 1% for the first ten years, surpassing the
USA
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in 2010,
ended
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and ended
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the period slightly lower than the
USA
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, usa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentages
  • exports
  • trend
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • stable
  • economic ties
  • demand
  • decline
  • recovery
  • policy changes
  • trade relationship
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • temporary surge
  • specific events
  • incentives
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