The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
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of car owners in one specific country from 1995 and 2015, with its prediction for 2025.
It is clear that
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the highest proportion of people possess one car,
while
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it is expected to change in the future to
two
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or more
cars
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.
Overall
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, the number of those without any vehicles decreases over the period, as
opoosed
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opposed
to a rising
percentage
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of those with
two
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or more
cars
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. Focusing first on ownership with one or without any car, in 1995, almost 40% of citizens did not have an opportunity to acquire a vehicle,
while
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during the following years, their proportion dropped gradually by nearly 15% by 2015. Regarding one-car owners, at the beginning of the period, their
percentage
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accounted for approximately 45% of the total
percentage
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of
population
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and it remained constant by 2015. With respect to the future predictions, the figure for each of these groups was almost the same, at 30% by 2025. As for
two
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or more
cars
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, in 1995, fewer than 20% of citizens belonged to
this
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group, as opposed to 2015, when
this
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figure reached the level of 30%, and it is expected to lead in the future, with 40% of owners of
two
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or more
cars
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by 2025.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, two, cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • car ownership
  • make
  • country
  • comparison
  • distribution
  • vehicle preferences
  • automotive market
  • popular brands
  • market share
  • dominant
  • proportion
  • trend
  • variation
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