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The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportions of
people
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 who owned a
car
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 in a particular country from 1995 to 2025.
Overall
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, the rate at which
people
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 owned a
car
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 fluctuated during the thirty-year
period
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, with the majority of the population owning
one
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car
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 throughout the years, with the exception
in
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of
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 2025.
Firstly
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, in 1995, about 45% of citizens owned
one
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car
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, which is the highest, followed by
people
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 with no
car
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 at approximately 38%.
Similarly
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 to 1995,
this
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 trend continued over a decade, with
people
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 having
one
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car
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 topping the list and
people
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 owning two or more cars at the bottom.
By contrast
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, in 2025, the percentage of the population owing more than
one
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car
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 skyrocketed from 30% in 2015 to around 40% in 2025, now as the highest ownership of cars, the proportion of
people
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 with
one
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car
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 recorded a sharp dropped from about 43% in 2015 to just below 30% over the ten-year
period
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. In general,
while
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 the ownership of
one
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car
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 remained constant by topping the list over the first 20 years, these figures fell dramatically
at the end
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 of the
period
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, recording the lowest percentage
at the end
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 of the given
period
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, car, period, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • car ownership
  • make
  • country
  • comparison
  • distribution
  • vehicle preferences
  • automotive market
  • popular brands
  • market share
  • dominant
  • proportion
  • trend
  • variation
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