The pie chart illustrates that in Canada the electric devices used by some people in the age group from 18 to 25
use
to watch screens in two different years with 2 charts. The data is depicted in percentages.
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used
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This
is explicitly observed that a totalLinking Words
6
devices seem that be mobile phones, Laptops, Tablets, computers, flat TVs, and Conventional TVs. In 2009 people Change preposition
of 6
consume
conventional Wrong verb form
consumed
tv was
at the highest percentage Verb problem
TV
of
34% Change preposition
apply
whereas
in 2019 it was just left by 4%.
On the one hand, mobiles were at 15% and Linking Words
its
consumption rose in 2019 it was 26% Correct pronoun usage
their
grown
of 10 numbers. Now laptops are at 20% in 2009 and in 2019 the percentage decreased up to 12%. Replace the word
growth
Moreover
, The tablet shows that in Linking Words
initial
year it was used by 5% of people Add an article
the initial
an initial
while
in 2019 there was a significant bump Linking Words
by
14%.
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of
On the other hand
, desktop computers were consumed by 18% of the population Linking Words
from
Canada but comes to 2019 it Change preposition
of
was
declined Unnecessary verb
apply
left at
12%. Wrong verb form
leaving
Furthermore
, Flat Televisions were at 8% which is climbing by 19% in 2019. Linking Words
Lastly
, conventional TVs Linking Words
the
lion's share of a chunk of 34% in 2009 and its consumption sharply declined by 30%.Add a missing verb
had the
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