Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the neighbor. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution

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Dear neighbour, Hope you are doing fine. I am writing

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letter to share my concerns about you playing loud music at your home. I am glad to know that you are as fond of music as I am, and you like to play songs late at night with

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volume.

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It might be very

enjoyful

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enjoyable

to you, unfortunately, for me and my family,

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is very disturbing. I am not able to sleep well

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high-volume musical tones which can lead to health problems for me.

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, my children are

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not able to focus on studies which may impact their academic scores. I hope you will understand

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predicament. I sincerely request you to tone down the speakers and bass so that we can peacefully carry on with our activities. I suggest you use a good quality headphone so that you keep enjoying the melodies

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we do not feel

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disturbed

. I hope you

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consider

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. I am looking forward to your acknowledgement. Kind regards,

Sumit

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music, melody, songs, albums, speaker, bass, noise, voice, high volume

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coherence and cohesion

Consider organizing the letter into clear paragraphs with distinct ideas. Your situation, the problems caused, and the solutions could be better separated to enhance clarity.

task achievement

Make sure to use correct wording and phrasing to improve your writing. For instance, instead of 'enjoyful', 'enjoyable' would be more appropriate, and 'disturbing' instead of 'disturb' in your context.

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You addressed the concerns directly, and your tone remains polite throughout the letter, which is commendable.

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You've included a clear solution by suggesting the use of headphones, which is practical and considerate.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

182 words

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Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the neighbor. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Research shows that increasing numbers of people are now living in mega-cities: cities of more than 20 million inhabitants. Is this a positive or negative development?

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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news, while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Today family members do not eat meals together. Why does this happen? Is this a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.