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Writing Samples
Band 5

Write a letter to travel agency to inquire some information about a trip. - Ask destination and price -When do want to travel and why - Inquire about available packages or deals for the desired destinations

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Dear,travel agency The reason why
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 am writing
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 letter to you is that
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 want to inquire about your agency.Are your service have
travel
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a travel
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 package
that
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from
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 to
russia
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Russia
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 around 16 or 18 of
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 because
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 20
december
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i
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 have to go wedding party my best friend is
jacky
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 will marry that's why
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 visit
russia
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Russia
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untill
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until
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 day. If it comes to price when
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 surfaced the net
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 suddenly faced
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apply
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your webpage. Tour company selling more discounts. I tell the truth
initially
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 did not trust and
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 decided to use your firm.
Cost
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 of your company is very suitable for my budget. Can you tell me your available packages
about
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for
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 my notice
flight's
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flights
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 have 3 packages option first one is ECO,the second is simple,
the
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 third is
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business
. I choose the simple ones. Thank you for your attention to
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 letter. I
took
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 forward to receiving a prompt reply at your earliest
convinience
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convenience
. Yours faithfully Nicolas Jackson.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to structure your letter more clearly with distinct paragraphs for greeting, body, and closing.
task achievement
Clarify and elaborate on your inquiries regarding travel packages to make your requests more precise.
task achievement
The letter clearly states the purpose of your inquiry and includes relevant personal background information.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and polite, which is appropriate for this context.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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