The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart graph that we have shows the percentage of a drug company's sales from 2002 to 2006. We have there America,
Europe
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and Asia.
Overall
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, America had a very good start in 2002 with 41 per cent, but
then
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from 2003 and 2004, it decreased, from 41 in 2003 to 27 in 2004.
However
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, it increased again to 29 in 2005 and 30 in 2006.
Europe
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had 34% in 2002 and 30% in 2006. It constantly decreased almost all the time,
however
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in 2004 the percentage increased drastically. Asia steadily increases all the time from 25% in 2002 to 40% in 2006. The America in 2003 fell from 41 to 35. And
then
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it dramatically fell in 2004 to 27 per cent.
However
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, from 2005 it marginally increased from 29 to 30.
Europe
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in 2002 had 34%,but
then
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negligible increased to 35% in 2003, in 2004 it increased slightly again, to 38%.
However
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, in 2005
Europe
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fell dramatically to 34 and to 30% in 2006. Asia,
on the other hand
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from other continents only increased year by year. It started with 25 and ended with 40. In 2003 it increased to 30 and
after
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this
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steadily increased, with 35% in 2004, 37% in 2005 and
finally
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40% in 2006.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words europe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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