Undoubtedly, with the rapid development of nations, authorities tend to tax fees
in
populations to improve the whole Change preposition
on
country
. Use synonyms
Whereas
some people believe individuals should keep their all incomes by themselves, others prefer paying a part of Linking Words
salary
to contribute Correct pronoun usage
their salary
society
Change preposition
to society
has
more benefits. As for my perspective, I firmly agree with the latter, and the reasons will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.
Wrong verb form
having
To begin
with, in terms of Linking Words
domestic
aspect, keeping all own salary by individuals themselves seems really fair and Correct article usage
the domestic
naturally
; Change the word
natural
however
, in order to build an advanced Linking Words
country
, the authorities need enough funding to establish the complete amenities and infrastructures. Use synonyms
That is
, a developed Linking Words
country
cannot be operated without the Use synonyms
taxes
paid by citizens. Take Use synonyms
myself
as an example. Public Change the pronoun
me
tranportations
are extremely vital for my daily life because I do not have any license to drive. Kaohsiung's Correct your spelling
transportations
transportation
authoriy
is building a new metro line which will pass by my house, it will reduce my commute time Correct your spelling
authority
almost
half Change preposition
by almost
hour
to go to my university.
Correct article usage
an hour
Moreover
, talking about Linking Words
international
portion, Correct article usage
the international
taxes
can be used on military Use synonyms
defense
and diplomacy, not only can Change the spelling
defence
thrength
our Correct your spelling
strengthen
defensive
ability but Replace the word
defence
also
maintain the relationship among nations. If people save their whole incomes for personal use, our Linking Words
country
would not progress anymore, since we do not have any funds to contribute Use synonyms
out
state Change preposition
to
among
international stage. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, Linking Words
due to
political Linking Words
reason
, Taiwan has been adding Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
military
budget and seeking other nations' Correct article usage
a military
cooperations
, and the Fix the agreement mistake
cooperation
taxes
paid by Use synonyms
taiwaneses
are the primary Correct your spelling
Taiwanese
sourse
.
In conclusion, citizens ought to contribute some Correct your spelling
source
taxes
to society because it really benefits Use synonyms
progress
of whole countries Correct article usage
the progress
such
as infrastructures and convenience facilities, and Linking Words
providing
sufficient budget Wrong verb form
provides
on
Change preposition
for
military
to secure people's Add an article
the military
safe
.Replace the word
safety
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