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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Nhi

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Nhi
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This
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 table
is showing
Wrong verb form
shows
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 the expenses of
the
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apply
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individuals in multiple nations
such
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 as
Turkey
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, Italy,
Spain
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,
sweden
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Sweden
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 and
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Irland
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Ireland
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 in
year
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the year
a year
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of
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apply
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2002. Generally, the table
is viewing
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views
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the
spendings
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spending
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 of different categories like food/drinks/
tobaco
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tobacco
, clothing/footwear and leisure/
education
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.
Turkey
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 is spending on
the
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apply
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food more than any other
countery
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country
while
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Spain
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 is the lowest in
education
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.
Begining
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Beginning
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 with
Comparison
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a Comparison
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 between
Turkey
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 and
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Irland
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Ireland
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 it's
clearly
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clear
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 that
Turky
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Turkey
 is
spening
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spending
 money more on groceries
more
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apply
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than
Irland
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 nearly by 4%.
Moreover
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, both countries
are
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apply
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buying
percentage
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percentages
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 of clothing are almost the same 6.63 and 6.43 respectively.
Finally
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,
education
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is
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has
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higher
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a higher
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 percentage in
Turkey
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4.35
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at 4.35
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while
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 in
Irland
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 is 2.21
On the other hand
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,
italy
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Italy
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,
Spain
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 and Sweden almost have the same percentage.
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Additionally
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Additionally,
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Spain
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have
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has
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 the highest in food spending 18.80%,
while
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ahowed
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showed
 the lowest
spening
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spending
in
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on
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education
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1.98
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at 1.98
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%.
Finally
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, Italy and Sweden have the same amount of
spening
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spending
 in
education
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words turkey, spain, irland, education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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