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The table shows the changes in carbon production in four countries from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the changes in carbon production in four countries from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
carbon
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emission
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emissions
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 of four African countries over
the
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 4-year period. It is clear from the table that
Nigera
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Nigeria
 had the
most
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highest
of
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carbon
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emission
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emissions
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than
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 other countries,
while
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 the total
carbon
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emission
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 of Algeria in four
year
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 did not overtake any
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 of
Nigeria
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. In 1995, 2
millions kilogram
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million kilograms
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 of
carbon
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emission
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emissions
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 in
Nigeria
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, and increased steadily from 2.1 to 2.3
millions kilogram
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million kilograms
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, which was
much
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 higher
carbon
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emission
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 than
others
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 countries,
while
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Nigeria
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 did not have any
carbon
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emission
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emissions
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 from 1995 to 1996. In 1997, the table shows that
carbon
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emission
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emissions
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of
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Nigeria
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 began to rise from 40000
kilograms
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 to 50000
kilograms
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 between 1997 to 1999, and saw a decline to 15000
kilograms
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 in 1998.
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,
carbon
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emission
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 of Congo fell 20000
kilograms
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 every year from 270000
kilograms
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 to 210000
kilograms
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, and the figure decreased dramatically to 100000
kilograms
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 in 1999.
carbon
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emission
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 of Bostwana dropped rapidly from 210000 to 7000
kilograms
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 between 1995 and 1996, but we saw
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 from 15000 to 75000
kilograms
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 between 1997 and 1999.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, emission, nigeria, kilograms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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