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Band 4.5

More and more plastic is polluting the city, countryside and ocean. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve these problems?

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Plastic
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waste
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becomes
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has become
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 the utmost issue in the world whether it is in
city
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cities
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,
village
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villages
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 or
in
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rivers.
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, there are multifarious problems that
are
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occured
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occur
due to
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plastic
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yet
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it
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they
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 could
be combat
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 by taking
right
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the right
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 steps on time. In
this
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 essay, I will explore both
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viewpoint
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viewpoints
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 that what are the effects of
plastic
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 pollution and how it is resolved in the following paragraphs. Considering the problems
first,
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plastic
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waste
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 is the major pollution which causes severe illness to individuals.
At
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first
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the first
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 place, multitudes do not put the
waste
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on
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in
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 the proper place where it
is belong
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 to,
instead
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, they
are throwing
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 it in the streets and
any where
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 they get
the
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open space.
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, when that
plastic
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 substance
decomposed
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 itself, it produces
the
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a
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 weird smell and
people
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 are unable to take healthy
breathe
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.
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, whenever individuals travel in some holy places, there are ample
number
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numbers
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 of rivers where
people
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 take
bath
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a bath
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 and
pore
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pour
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 the water
in
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into
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 bottle as a holy water but some of them are polluting it by putting
the
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plastic
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waste
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 in it.
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, it causes stomach
as well as
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 digestion problems because they are consuming the same water. As every problem
have
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 some solution, it
also
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 has some. First and foremost
one is
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 the government should organise several
campaign
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campaigns
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 for
awarness
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awareness
. To explain, if the higher authority takes the
necessity
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necessary
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 steps to solve it, multitudes know what is right and what is wrong for their health and try to
aware
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 other as well. Despite it, the authorities should take a huge amount of
fine
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 from
people
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 who
are not obey
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 the rules. It not only makes
the
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people
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 think twice before doing pollution but
also
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guide
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guides
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 their children in a better way.
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, any problem can
be solve
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 by taking
correct
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the correct
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 action
on
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at
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a
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the
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 right time. In conclusion,
while
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 it is not
any
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an
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 easy task to solve
but
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it can
be combat
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be combated
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 by taking accurate actions
such
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 as
by
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organising camps and putting penalties.

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task achievement
Ensure a more precise introduction that clearly outlines the problems and solutions you will discuss.
coherence and cohesion
Use clearer connections between ideas and paragraphs to improve flow and coherence.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples and evidence to support your claims regarding the effects of plastic waste.
task achievement
Good attempt to address both problems and solutions related to plastic waste.
coherence and cohesion
The structure of your essay is clear with distinct paragraphs for different points.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • ecosystems
  • microplastics
  • degradation
  • contamination
  • wildlife
  • health risks
  • financial resources
  • food chain
  • visual appeal
  • ingestion
  • entanglement
  • urban areas
  • natural landscapes
  • waste management
  • sustainability
  • recycling
  • biodegradable
  • public awareness
  • legislation
  • regulation
  • single-use plastics
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