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Writing Samples
Band 5

You have recently come back from an overseas holiday. You face some problems with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter • Details about hotel booking • Problems that you faced there • Gives the distance to the travel agent so that such problems are not repeated

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Dear
sir
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Sir
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 or
madam
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Madam
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, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with
hotel
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the hotel
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 booking which I made through you.
Last
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 week, I reserved a hotel
room
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 from your agency for two days in
canada
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Canada
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. It was a
five star
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five-star
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 hotel named
sitara
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Sitara
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. I booked a
room
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 with two beds and air
conditionar
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conditioning
service
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. I
also
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payed
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paid
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 for food
service
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to
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at
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 my door. I had to face lots of
problem
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problems
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 during my stay.
Firstly
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, It was not a double beds'
room
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. I had to adjust there with my friend with
single
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a single
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 bed.
Moreover
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,
room
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service
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 was very poor and delivery of food was too late. AC was not working properly. It was really a bad experience for us. I want to suggest that before reserving
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room
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a room
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 for clients you should
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be strickt
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strickt
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strict
to
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about
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 their needs.If there is no
avaliablity
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availability
 of
such
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service
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,
client
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the client
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 should
be know
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to
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too
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 that.
Apart from
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this
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, you should give some
compensate
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compensation
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 to
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the client
a client
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client
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clients
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 so that they can forget some
unconvienceness
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inconvenience
. Best regards, Manoj
kumar
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Kumar
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single main idea and follow a clear organizational pattern.
task achievement
Use more varied vocabulary and phrases to enhance the tone of your letter and make it more formal.
coherence and cohesion
The letter includes a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps to structure the response well.
task achievement
You addressed the key issues and provided suggestions for improvement, which shows critical thinking.
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