Many people who care for the elderly do not have enugh time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

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Elder people are the

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of every nation as they have great experience of past life and youth can learn

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them. Unfortunately, they don't have enough time to spend with their elders.

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You have chosen a relevant and important topic that addresses the challenges faced by caregivers of the elderly, which is commendable.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

65 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

caregiver
emotional burden
burnout
elderly
neglect
loneliness
deterioration
economic impact
financial strain
quality of care
attention
health needs
physical needs
emotional needs
time constraints
assisted living
community support

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enugh time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to information in many countries. This is a danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some old people today's struggle with the use of modern technology such as smartphone and computers. what is the cause of this? what are the some possible solutions?

Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.

Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination, but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.