Many people who care for the elderly do not have enugh time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

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of every nation as they have great experience of past life and youth can learn

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them. Unfortunately, they don't have enough time to spend with their elders.

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You have chosen a relevant and important topic that addresses the challenges faced by caregivers of the elderly, which is commendable.

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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65 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

caregiver
emotional burden
burnout
elderly
neglect
loneliness
deterioration
economic impact
financial strain
quality of care
attention
health needs
physical needs
emotional needs
time constraints
assisted living
community support

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enugh time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Some people believe social media is very important in our daily life, other believe it is waste of time. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle. Which of these do you prefer? What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and a bicycle?

Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?