You live in a university hostel which you share with another student. However, your roommate creates a lot of problems for you, and you find it very difficult to live with him/her. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the university. In the letter, • explain the situation • describe your problems and why it is difficult to work • state what kind of changes you would prefer

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Dear Sir, My name is Sakshi Kansara, my student number is 27280567 and I am currently accomodating in

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no. 302 with one roommate. It has come to my attention that my roommate smokes every hour and I am unable to bear the smell as I am allergic to smoke.

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, every weekend she calls a bunch of her friends and plays loud music,

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impossible for me to concentrate on my studies, especially when exams are upcoming.

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, I would like to submit a request for changing my

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and I have already filled out the form and emailed it to you.

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, I would prefer a single

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with a balcony, as living alone will help me to focus on my exams and get fresh air from the balcony.

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, I am fond of plants so I would like to put them on my balcony. My parents have already agreed to pay the additional price for upgrading my

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. I hope you consider

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sincere issue and assist me as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your's sincerely, Sakshi

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Task Achievement

The letter contains all necessary components and detailed explanations of your problems.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to keep to one idea per paragraph to improve clarity, especially in the second paragraph where multiple issues are mentioned.

Coherence and Cohesion

Excellent use of a formal tone and structure in both the greeting and closing.

Task Achievement

Clear explanation of your situation and the specific changes you prefer.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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