The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The

blue print

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blueprint

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of a public

library

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layout shows what

did

Verb problem

apply

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look

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looked

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like 20 years ago compared to how it is in

present

Correct article usage

the present

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time. The layout illustrates the changes that

has

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have

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been made to suit today's

need

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needs

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. The entrance in the renovated building is more spacious in

comparision

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comparison

to the old building, which was

crowd

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crowded

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with tables and chairs in the junction area. Digitalisation is

adapted

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adopted

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in the current

library

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build; it has a cafe and lecture room to enhance

learning

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the learning

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experience. There is a dedicated zone for computers. The right corridor area is now used as

self service

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self-service

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to issue and return books machine. The old

library

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building

as well as

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the

recent

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recently

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developed

library

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both

consists

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consist

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children's books area. The major difference

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apply

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Correct pronoun usage

apply

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is the new

build

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building

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has more facilities and comfort for young children

such

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as sofas and storytelling events. Both the buildings have adult

ficition

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fiction

books section.

To sum up

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, there are many compartmentalised areas to fit in more facilities compared to the old constructed

library

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with modern needs and comfort in the present infrastructure of the

library

Use synonyms

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

184 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

layout
modern technology
computer stations
multimedia room
multi-purpose spaces
conference rooms
study spaces
community-oriented services
accessibility
wider aisles
ramps
designated areas
people with disabilities
cafeteria
coffee shop
leisurely space

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