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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The
blue print
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blueprint
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 of a public
library
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 layout shows what
did
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apply
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it
look
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looked
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 like 20 years ago compared to how it is in
present
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the present
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 time. The layout illustrates the changes that
has
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have
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 been made to suit today's
need
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needs
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. The entrance in the renovated building is more spacious in
comparision
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comparison
 to the old building, which was
crowd
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crowded
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 with tables and chairs in the junction area. Digitalisation is
adapted
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adopted
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 in the current
library
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 build; it has a cafe and lecture room to enhance
learning
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the learning
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 experience. There is a dedicated zone for computers. The right corridor area is now used as
self service
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 to issue and return books machine. The old
library
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 building
as well as
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 the
recent
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recently
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 developed
library
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 both
consists
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consist
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 children's books area. The major difference
in
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apply
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it
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apply
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is the new
build
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building
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 has more facilities and comfort for young children
such
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 as sofas and storytelling events. Both the buildings have adult
ficition
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fiction
 books section.
To sum up
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, there are many compartmentalised areas to fit in more facilities compared to the old constructed
library
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 with modern needs and comfort in the present infrastructure of the
library
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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